narrative writing plan

Bend Stretch and leap

cave drawing art

siosiua is writing

4 years ago my mum and dad had a reading


In tonga we went to a Village Cold nukuʻalofa


And we went and eat pig and its was yummy

And we wrere soooo fool That's my stomach was going to pop and The last thing we did was eating ice cream.

siosiua is writing

What is the name of this term’s inquiry?


→ te wa toi


Based on our immersion assembly item and the inquiry name, what do you think we are going to be learning about this term/ what do you think we will be doing?


→ art


How do you feel about this term’s inquiry topic?


→ that Its cool and fun
What do you already know which will help you with the inquiry topic?
→ learning to be a artist
What are you finding challenging/difficult at school at the moment?
→ that we didit do this last term
What do you think could help you overcome these challenges?
→ its good because it can help me with my learning
What do you want to achieve this term/ what are your learning goals?

→ to not be a annoying in learning groups
How can your teachers support/ help you with achieving these goals?

→ put me Somewhere else
Do you think the inquiry will help you achieve your goals? How?
→ Learning about And loving art and have fun

siosiua is writing plan

Writing: last ‘month on a monday my mum’ dad and my brother and’ my Unties and uncles ‘and my cousin went to the tonga vs New zealand and its was fun And the last ‘thing we went to was; was Valentines and my cousin ‘had a goooood dayy ‘and my dad Gave him $100 and he was cry on my dads Shoulder



And Then we took a picture in the photoroom and we went home .

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PLAN-Just write some keywords to help when you write your sentences

Introduce your animation What are we learning about this term? What do objects need so they can move?

This term we a learning to Move ya body

Explain the game that you are playing.

Running

Explain what your animation shows.

Me running like usain bolt.

Summary/ Conclusion - Thank your audience and ask for a comment to be left on your blog.

Thank you for watching my animation. I hope you can enjoyed my Work and please comment on my blog thank you

WRITE Write out your voice over using paragraphs, ready to post on your blog. Begin by Copyiing from the boxes above.  Then read through it and fix it up (edit) to make sure it makes sense.

My animation is about me running hundred meter sprint and coming first place.

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The mother sheep followed me along the path, picking up her pace as she realised I was within
touching distance of her lamb. She let out a loud low bleat which echoed across the paddock. The sleeping lamb lifted it’s head and turned toward us, before slowly returning to it’s sleep. As the sheep got closer and closer, I thought about whether I should turn and run. I began to panic, “Was she going to attack me?” Holding my breath, I froze. I sighed as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards its lamb. “Phew, that was a close call.

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my writing

The mother sheep followed me along the path, picking up her pace as she realised I was within touching distance of her lamb. She let out a loud low bleat which echoed across the paddock. The sleeping lamb lifted it’s head and turned toward us, before slowly returning to it’s sleep. As the sheep got closer and closer, I thought about whether I should turn and run. I began to panic, “Was she going to attack me?” Holding my breath, I froze. I sighed as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards its lamb. “Phew, that was a close call

Narrative Writing

One day I had a friend who was a fat zombie who couldn’t fit through the gate

Once upon a time I had a best friend who Live in a castle far far away and me and my other friend were Driving dther

And it Took us 100 hars bat we cat dther

And we getting out of the car and we got to the gat

My best friend was waiting for as and when we were walking

My Ada fat zombie friend

narratve

Here is the plan for my writing for this week.

Narrative

One morning I was walking to school with my friend and my teacher Miss West told my friend to climb up and get the ball with a ladder and my friend’s leg slipped and he fell down and broke his leg very bad. He was going to die but I saved the day and took him to the Tongan hospital.




Later on that day the doctor said his leg was paralyzed and that afternoon my poor friend died. I was so sad but while I was sitting in the hospital room some of our other friends came to visit but it was too late our friend was already dead.




We didn’t know but in the other room our friend was turning



into a zombie and my friends were scared when we heard him growling he came crawling in the room that we were in so we ran away and were hiding inside the hospital cupboard and he was looking for us. We could hear him breathing outside of the door we running we saw him and we all laughed at him while he was trying to get us.